Eh.... My essay doesn't seem too great. Readers?

College Essays
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<p>:) Q: Topic of your choice.
Length: 528 words (too long?)</p>

<p>I'll PM it to any takers.
(Also, please tell me what year you applied to college, and/or what college you are currently attending. Safety purposes.)</p>

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<p>I'd love to read your essay. I'm class of '09 (a rising senior), but I'd love to read it if I'm not applying to that school. Can you please indicate the school?</p>

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<p>Hey I'll be happy to critique your essay for you. I hope yours isn't considered too long cause I just finished mine and it's 820 words :(. I'll be applying to washu.</p>

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<p>Well... it's my general one-size-fits-all essay. What schools are you looking at?</p>

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<p>sure ill read</p>

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<p>sure, email at <a href="mailto:RayAllen333@gmail.com">RayAllen333@gmail.com</a> with CC in subject - I hate spam.</p>

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<p>Even if incoming seniors who want to read the essay won't apply to the same schools, they can still use your essay.</p>

<p>I'll take a look. Make sure that before you ask anyone, though, you like your own essay first.</p>

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<p>I'll take a look.</p>

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<p>im a rising senior; i'll apply to berkeley caltech sort of engineering schools.
can i take a look?
i wont start on my app until oct,so i need to prepare a lil</p>

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<p>I'm class of '09<br>
now can i take a look? PM me please. i really need some inspirations right now
thanks</p>