either of them "decent"??? two potential essays..

College Essays
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<p>so i have two potential common app essays. basically i don't like to stress too much about these kind of things so i'd like to just pick some, do a little more editing and send them off. so if anyone wouldn't mind just looking them over real quick and letting me know if either of them would be alright and which one's better so i can focus on that one. kay let me know if you woulnd't mind having a look!</p>

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<p>i'll take a look :D</p>

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<p>ding. me .</p>

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<p>anyone else??</p>

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<p>alrighty I'm ready</p>

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<p>You can send them to me if you'd like more advice. I'm bored enough to do it.
:P</p>

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<p>ok send it to me too</p>

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<p>i'd like to read it!</p>

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<p>I would like to read it.</p>