<p>It's not a final draft by any means, but before I give it to a teacher for corrections I'd like some general starting points. I'll message it to you if you can help me out!</p>
<p>Thanks :)</p>
<p>It's not a final draft by any means, but before I give it to a teacher for corrections I'd like some general starting points. I'll message it to you if you can help me out!</p>
<p>Thanks :)</p>
<p>sure
PM me</p>