<p>I really need help in making my essay better. My topic is one that would naturally involve an emotional reaction, but I don't know how to add that element to my essay. If you'd like to read it and critique it, please PM me! Thanks so much!</p>
<p>sure, send it.</p>
<p>Sure thing! Send it over.</p>
<p>i’ll read yours if you read mine. pm me!</p>
<p>ill read just send it pm it tome</p>
<p>I’ll love to help. PM me 
(I’m an 09’er though)</p>
<p>ill take a look :)</p>
<p>i’ll read yours if you will read mine… or i’ll just read yours , haha</p>
<p>send it over here</p>
<p>Thanks guys, sent to all of you!</p>