<p>A why I want to be an engineer essay wrapped up into a why this school essay...</p>
<p>I'm worried Im sounding boring or too cliched?
Or that the essay doesn't flow?
But I'm generally an obsessive person, so I'd like other's editing skills/advice.
Would anyone like to read it?</p>
<p>bumpppppppp</p>
<p>me, i'll try my best to help, I plan on going into chem eng, but I don't think I'll be writing about that at all in my essay</p>
<p>the hint is to use a personal, almost conversational tone. I can have a look for you. PM me it.</p>
<p>i could try looking and giving feedback if you dont mind 09ers; PM me if you want</p>
<p>u get send it over!</p>
<p>I'll look it over--you can PM it to me if you'd like.</p>