<p>If anyone is willing to tell me what I should get rid of to shorten it, I'd really appreciate it. I made it a lot longer b/c of suggestions I was getting but I think it's too long now..</p>
<p>If anyone is willing to tell me what I should get rid of to shorten it, I'd really appreciate it. I made it a lot longer b/c of suggestions I was getting but I think it's too long now..</p>