<p>i need a few people to look over this essay. i tried to make it humorous but i'm not sure if it's too subtle to the point that it isn't funny.</p>
<p>any readers?</p>
<p>I'd read it.. I think UChicago has the most wonderfully challenging prompts. Luckily I'm not applying there :) I have MSN/Yahoo/Google Talk.</p>
<p>I'm a pretty random/funny kind of guy...I think =D. I'm not applying to UChicago, so if you feel comfortable, I'd be glad to help!</p>
<p>Glad to critique.</p>
<p>love to give it a shot if u still need help</p>
<p>i'll read it if you would like to let me=)</p>
<p>i'm already done with my response to the live the question one.</p>
<p>any more readers?</p>
<p>hey stasis, i thouht u took a unique approach in your essay and it seems to work for you. but isn't the essay supposed to be longer?</p>
<p>is there an essay range they ask for? i also thought my essay was short. but i wasn't sure what else to write to make it lengthier. i didn't want to make it superfluous.</p>
<p>I thought it was short because it was your rough draft...You could incorporate more details into your introduction and body. I'm sure you'll think of something; you've got a great sense of humor =D</p>
<p>haha i definitely will. thanks ;D</p>
<p>I'm applying to Uchicago as well tho I didn't write on the metaphorical road (I wrote on the particle accelerator). I'm willing to critique your essay if you do the same for me, so feel free to e-mail me your essays whenever you're ready. (I prefer e-mail because then I can attach your essays as a Word document so that I can add comments directly onto your essay.</p>
<p>bump 10char</p>
<p>^Heh, how many essays do you have to write? It must be a real torture!</p>
<p>haha do i not pass the background check?</p>
<p>two for UChicago. but they're a pain, especially this one. boo. :(</p>
<p>Man that stinks! I know how ya feel; essays are almost impossible to write, particularly starting them.</p>
<p>i am applying for UChicago, but i chose the #1 " At present you need to live the question " and i got it done. if you want, i'd love to read your essay. PM me.</p>
<p>i love reading uchic essays!
(im already in college btw)</p>
<p>Hey stasis! You helped me with a couple of essays before, I would be more than happy to return the favor!</p>