<p>Hi it's my second draft, and I need lots of reviews, so tell me you'll do it, n i'll PM it to you. thanks.</p>
<p>also, please tell me who you are in short ...</p>
<p>and i’ll be glad to rate yours in return :)</p>
<p>Sam…just make sure your essay is about you (how you felt/how you reacted to it/what you put into it/what you got out…), not the experience itself! Adcoms aren’t interesting in reading about an interesting experience, they want to know about you, through this experience.</p>
<p>hey thanks for the reply…yes there’s a lot of self-evaluation etc in the essay too…would you mind critiquing it?</p>
<p>I know I haven’t read the essay but just a tip. Talk about the experience, but also talk about how has effected how you think and how it has changed you.</p>
<p>thanks mr A</p>
<p>PM it over! I’m not applying to any of the top schools…</p>
<p>bump!!!</p>
<p>Hey, I’ll be willing to read it.</p>
<p>thanks skylarkin!</p>
<p>anyone else please :D???</p>
<p>I’ll will read yours, I sent mine off to Columbia already >.></p>
<p>@powa2 thanks!</p>
<p>anyone else please?</p>
<p>Hi - I’d be happy to take a look and send you some comments. </p>
<p>Brief sum about me: I graduated from an IB school in London this May and I am on a gap year interning at a hospital in Texas.</p>
<p>thanks maxie91…</p>
<p>any other takers!???</p>
<p>I can read and revise it</p>
<p>thanks alex7592!</p>
<p>hi is anyone ready to offer some help??</p>
<p>bump! </p>
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<p>sure. pm me or email me at <a href="mailto:joshburger811■■■■■■.com">joshburger811■■■■■■.com</a></p>