essay about an unique experience. but probably needs major correction

Applying to College
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<p>finally I finished my essay. I think the topic is kind of unique.
anyone willing to read it and correct it and give advice on it.
I'd appreciate your help.</p>

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<p>Red rover red rover, pm it on over. :)</p>

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<p>I'd like to read it. I'll try to get back to you as fast as I can.</p>

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<p>^ha. </p>

<p>I'll take a look. (:</p>

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<p>i</a> can help</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>I'll read it.</p>

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<p>I'll look it over.</p>

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<p>ok pm it to me</p>