Essay about getting hit by a car. Rough Draft too

<p>What do you think about my experience about getting hit by a car? Just want your opinions. </p>

<p>PM me if you want to read it and criticize it. Remember it a rough, rough, rough draft.</p>

<p>Yeah i learned something from it. It wasnt even really hurt from getting hit, so it is not a sob story. I just went to the hospital because i had to. Do you think it will look bad if i write about it? i never looked at it in that perspective.</p>

<p>Looks like my post was deleted Joey, you can PM me for more details.</p>