<p>this is the first time im doing this.
i really need some feedback on my writing.
anyone willing to give it a read? it needs more editing stilll... but just tell me what you think.
and be brutal please? :)</p>
<p>this is the first time im doing this.
i really need some feedback on my writing.
anyone willing to give it a read? it needs more editing stilll... but just tell me what you think.
and be brutal please? :)</p>