Essay About the 'F' Word?

College Essays
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<p>Tangentially, of course. I'm running down to the wire here for EA, and I could use any critiques. The essay is specific to my last name, so anyone with a name longer than two letters is welcome to read. </p>

<p>I also have a Stanford intellectual vitality essay where I satirize myself and the prompt. So far one loved it, one thought it was over the top, and one thought I'd be crazy to send it. Any non-Stanford applicants please? (I will check post histories obsessively, so if you have like five posts in just the essay section, sorry, I'm too paranoid)</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>what is your last name?
Fa?
Fe?
Fi?
Fo?
Fu?</p>

<p>o_o
can't think of any other vowels.</p>

<p>anyways, i'd like to read it.</p>

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<p>The last one, lol. I'll send it right now.</p>

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<p>mike fu!
lol</p>

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<p>i'll read it. i'm not applying to stanford, and i'm pretty good at editing.</p>

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<p>Thanks, I PMed you both, since I wasn't sure which you wanted.</p>

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<p>i sent in my stanford app today. id like to see what you wrote for the vitality one, and if you send me the other ill critique it too</p>

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<p>I sent you the common app one, but not the Stanford one. Don't get me wrong, I believe that you sent in your app today, and I don't think you'd take it, but better safe than sorry, ya know? As I mentioned, I'm kind of paranoid about this, :).</p>

<p>I'll send it to you after tomorrow, if you still want to read it just out of curiosity.</p>

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<p>i'd be willing to read :]</p>

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<p>send urs to me...i'll try to critique.</p>

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<p>Hey, thanks guys, but it's sent out and done, so I don't need any more readers.</p>