Essay advice?

<p>I haven't finished my essay yet, but I was hoping to line up some parents, hopefully with some college essay experience, to give me a little advice. It should be done by tomorrow night. I'd appreciate it a lot</p>

<p>bump. i know its not done yet but it'd put my mine at ease if i had some takers</p>

<p>Before you do anything, read these two very helpful links about college essays (they're short -- don't panic).</p>

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<p>You can PM it to me when you are done; include your email address.</p>