Essay Advice?

<p>I know I should be posting this in the essays section but I would rather only get comments from the intels as I don't think my essay is upto an American students standard. I already used this essay for my Jan 1st and Jan 15th deadlines but didn't have anyone read it then. I had a few friends read it a few days ago and they gave me a few mixed reactions. So right now I am really scared of using it for my Feb 1st deadlines. So if anyones interested I will PM the essay to them.</p>

<p>Sure... PM it.</p>

<p>hey where are you applying for feb 1st?
i have wisconsin and michigan to go but am feeling lazy about finishing their applications.</p>

<p>i'll read your essay if u want....and if you arent applying to the above mentioned colleges.</p>

<p>even I have wisconsin left.. I guess i'll finish the essay tonight..</p>

<p>I have Dickinson and F&M left...really pinning my hopes on those two colleges thats why I want everything to be perfect</p>

<p>I may help you, too! I already sent all my applications and I became quite critical to admission essays lately.</p>

<p>I'm an international, too and was considered for a pretty prestigious scholarship with my essay so far. My apps are all in, and I would love to take a look.</p>

<p>sure, PM it to me.</p>