Essay Advices Plz!!

Colleges and Universities A-Z Stanford University
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<p>Hello,</p>

<p>I have written three different 500 words essay for the common app and would like some feedback. Stanford is my first choice school and I am very eager to find out how well they may stand in the eyes of Stanford admission officers. Any other comments on other aspects of the essays are also welcome. If you would like to read my essays, please leave your name and/or email address and I will send you my essays. Thank you very much!</p>

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<p>I'd be glad to look over them :)</p>

<p>I don't really want to give out my name on CC but my email is <a href="mailto:foggy_ambivalence@hotmail.com">foggy_ambivalence@hotmail.com</a> so you can email me at this address.</p>