Essay and EC supplement FEEDBACK?

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>So, I would appreciate some feedback on my two essays.</p>

<p>One is the long one and the other one is the "elaborate on an EC" one.</p>

<p>If you wish to read any of them, please let me know and i'll PM you :)</p>

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<p>bump…</p>

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<p>any1?..</p>

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<p>sure, I’ll read it if you want</p>

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<p>I read your EC essay if u read mine??</p>

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<p>i’ll read it</p>