Essay... anyone want to read?

Applying to College
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<p>This is my main essay. I am going to use it as my common app personal statement as well as my primary essay for several other colleges. Please respond below and I will PM you a copy. Please comment and give advise. ;) Thanks.</p>

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<p>sure i'll look at it</p>

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<p>I will read it</p>

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<p>sure send away</p>

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<p>I'd love to help.</p>

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<p>pm me, I'll take a look :)</p>

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<p>pm me i'll check it out and give ya any feedback</p>

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<p>sure, go for the PM</p>

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<p>ill read too!</p>

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<p>sure, i wanna read.</p>

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<p>sure, i'll read it and give feedback. hope i can help! :)</p>

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<p>hey, i'll give some feedback</p>

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<p>Sure. PM me.</p>

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<p>I'll read it too =)</p>

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<p>If you need anyone else -</p>

<p>yeah, I'll read.</p>

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<p>Thank you all for your help. My essay is now in the final stages and is no longer in need of advice. Once again thank you.</p>