Essay Appraisal - Please help!!!

<p>Hi Parents of CC'ers
I have been lurking on here for a while now and I have to admit I have been impressed with comments and opinions expressed in the forum.I am a prospective RD applicant to Sarah Lawrence, Bard, Muhlenberg, Berea and ED II applicant to Mount Holyoke and I'd appreciate honest responses to my essays and recommendations.Please be blunt (feel free to rip me apart if need be) in your responses. PM me if you're interested. Appraisals of currently-enrolled or recent alums of Mount Holyoke and Sarah Lawrence, Bard, Muhlenberg, Berea are especially welcome!!!!</p>

<p>I also have prompts to my essays.</p>

<p>PS: I have a December 20 deadline to beat!!!!!!!!!!!!</p>