Essay critics wanted

<p>Anyone willing to give me some feedback on my common app essay?</p>

<p>I'd be happy to read it.</p>

<p>Sure, I'll read it.</p>

<p>Also, I'm thinking about re-using my Stanford picture essay as the additional essay for Yale. But I'd like feedback on how depressing it is (it's about death) and whether it reveals enough about my personality.</p>

<p>I'll read it.. pm me if you still need opinions</p>

<p>Yeah sure! email at <a href="mailto:soham.gandhi@gmail.com">soham.gandhi@gmail.com</a> or pm me</p>

<p>Im just a junior, but PM me or send an e-mail to <a href="mailto:directorscut7@yahoo.com">directorscut7@yahoo.com</a>. I've just proofread 3 UCLA personal statements for my friends so I think I'm preety good :).</p>

<p>I'll take a look...my sis goes to yale.</p>

<p>I'll read it</p>

<p>i've applied SCEA, so i'll give it a look, but I have some deadlines coming up this friday. so I try to get back to you as soon as possible, but it may be next week.</p>

<p>I'm a current Yalie, so I believe I can understand what Yale wants :0
I'll take a peak.</p>

<p>If you want a fresh pair of eyes, I'll read -- pm or e-mail at <a href="mailto:seekr452@aol.com">seekr452@aol.com</a></p>