Essay critique/Essay swap?

<p>College admissions essays. Through PM, of course. I would love if someone who's experienced could help me revise my essay(s), but I wouldn't mind doing a swap either. :) </p>

<p>On a side note, I am new to this site, so if I'm doing something wrong please tell me, haha.</p>

<p>Anyone? I’d really love some feedback, and I don’t mind giving mine.</p>

<p>Hi, I’ll swap! Email me andre.nguyen92@**********</p>

<p>the email is gmail</p>

<p>I still can swap with anyone who wants to~</p>

<p>i would love to swap. oliviahuynh28 (at) yahoo.com</p>

<p>dkalownsNUBS, the email won’t go through?</p>

<p>OliviaH28, great! I’ll mail.</p>

<p>Will someone swap with me? I really need the help. My email is tttturtles@hotmail . com</p>

<p>Sure, eunhae! I’ll mail.</p>

<p>Awesome! I’ll PM you on this site</p>

<p>Can I please swap with someone also? I am also new, I just need some feedback on my UC essays so I can submit them!</p>

<p>We’ve got a google doc running, so you can join as well!</p>

<p>oh my gosh, Thank You so much! how do I join that?</p>

<p>I sent a link, if it went through (do links go through on this site?).</p>

<p>anyone who wishes to join, pm me and I’ll send a link.</p>

<p>yes, it did work! Thank you so much! I honestly don’t know what I would do otherwise… Thank you so so much!</p>

<p>you’re welcome! Just post your name and your essay.</p>

<p>hey guys :slight_smile: I added one other essay to the google docs, if anyone has time would you mind taking a look at it maybe? I would really appreciate this!
even if you don’t, I hope you have a relaxing day!</p>

<p>Hey! Sure, I’ll take a look at it. When do you need it looked over by? Right now I’n doing art and I neeeed to get it done, but I wouldn’t mind looking it over later.
And lol why do I see “OH NO JORDAN YOUR” or something like that (closed the page) on the top of the doc? XD</p>

<p>lol, I saw the “OH NO JORDAN YOUR” on the top of the page and wondered what it was… that wasn’t me, though, so I’m not too sure what it is.
and well my application is due tonight, but I’ve got other things for the app that I’m working on right now. Don’t worry about me. I would only like you to read my essay if you have time. If you can get to it, I would really appreciate it. But good luck on your art project! :)</p>