<p>I wrote an essay for my common app about the death of my friend. Anyone interested in giving me some critique? I'm worried that it is too focused on my friend and not enough on myself</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>I wrote an essay for my common app about the death of my friend. Anyone interested in giving me some critique? I'm worried that it is too focused on my friend and not enough on myself</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>