Essay critique

Applying to College
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<p>I think i have my final version. Anyone want to give me feedback?</p>

2

<p>Sure I'll comment</p>

3

<p>Sure, send in on over</p>

4

<p>sure...send it to me.</p>

5

<p>bump...anyone else?</p>

6

<p>i will do it</p>

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<p>k pm meee ill read</p>

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<p>PM me, I'll read</p>

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<p>yeah i'd love to.</p>

10

<p>i need to edit it more, ill send it to some if you still want.</p>

<p>also, if i send it to you...RESPOND, CRITICIZE, EDIT, tell me how to make it better...</p>

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<p>i'll read it too.</p>

12

<p>bumpage... anyone want to read?</p>

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<p>i will help</p>