<p>Can someone please critique my essay for college. It is a supplemental essay and I desperately need some advice on it. PM me if you are able to. Thank you so much. </p>
<p>Sincerely, </p>
<p>iwannatopcollege</p>
<p>Can someone please critique my essay for college. It is a supplemental essay and I desperately need some advice on it. PM me if you are able to. Thank you so much. </p>
<p>Sincerely, </p>
<p>iwannatopcollege</p>