Essay Doubt. Please help me...

<p>Hello,
So I just got deferred from my ED school, and now I really think the reason was my essay...
Thus, can anyone please proofread my essay and leave some comments, please...
Thank you so much :)</p>

<p>bump!</p>

<p>Sure, pm me (with the prompt)</p>

<p>Happy to take a look as well.</p>

<p>I’m also an applicant. You could PM me if you don’t mind.</p>

<p>thank you guys!
Also, anyone else out there?</p>

<p>yes. where’s your essay ?</p>

<p>be cautious in who you send it to</p>

<p>sure, wouldn’t mind helping , PM me</p>