I already turned everything in. I did not want to have others to influence this writing and I wanted it to be sincere and honest so I am posting just for post facto criticism.
I just want some opinions on my essays and their chance at helping me get in. I didn’t post my background info and objective scores because it might influence how people read the essays. However, if requested to get a better view the application as a whole I can upload those as well a bit later
someone pointed out I should not post essays online as someone might steal, so I will post them tomorrow. Thanks random internet dood.