<p>Does anyone want to give some feedback on my essay. This is the first draft. Also, the word count is 532 words, so should I shorten it?</p>
<p>I'll PM the essay, to whoever is willing to read it.</p>
<p>shoot me a pm and i can read it over for you.</p>
<p>i’ll give it a look</p>
<p>I’ll read it!</p>