<p>Hello CC community ! </p>
<p>I'm going through my application process for Upenn and would love to have a proofread/feedback of my "Why Upenn essay".</p>
<p>Please let me know if you are willing to help me. </p>
<p>You all have a great day ! :)</p>
<p>I’ll be willing to! No one’s been really answering these proofreading requests lately.</p>
<p>Thanks man !
Since we both still are under 15 messages, I don’t think we can PM yet.
Here is my email address : *****<strong><em>@</em></strong>*******</p>
<p>EDIT: Apparently I can’t post my email address O.o</p>
<p>You wouldn’t want to share emails on a public site, so it would be blocked, I’ll go ahead and pm you my email and you can just email the essay</p>
<p>Well, I was going to share my secondary email, the one made for this kind of stuff 
But it sounds good this way too</p>
<p>Hey man,</p>
<p>As a fellow applicant I’d have no problem reading your essay and offering some feedback. PM me if you want :)</p>
<p>pm me if you would… i will give you my feedback.</p>
<p>I’d love to read it too! PM me :)</p>
<p>If you still want, I’d love to read your essay as well</p>
<p>I’d love to read your essay! I’ll PM you!</p>