Essay for High School Research Intership!!! PLEASE CRITIQUE!!

<p>It is a very competitive program with about 1% admission rate. I spent a lot of time on my essay, please critique it and provide feedback!!!!!</p>

<p>The admission is mostly solely based on this essay alone. Thus, I spent a lot of time and made it really good.</p>

<p>So if anyone has time and advice, please let me know so I can PM the essay over to you.</p>

<p>Sure. Send it over</p>

<p>PM it to me</p>

<p>sure send it over</p>

<p>bumppppp…anyone pleaseee</p>

<p>I’ve got some time, so I’d be happy to review it for you.</p>

<p>did u ever email or pm it to me
id like to see it and review it stil lif u want</p>

<p>the thing is…i need someone whos not a junior etc lol because you might be applying to the program too (not saying that you are, just hypothetically) and im just being a bit precautious.</p>

<p>Hey, I’m a sophomore, but I got 800 on Writing. I’m good at essays. Can you pm it here? I’ll take a look :]</p>

<p>yo you can send me your essay. i participated in research internships like rsi before so i might be of some help :)</p>

<p>ill take a look if u still want
like 1234d i wrote an essay for a summer internship and got it so i know whatthey are looking for</p>