<p>I wrote the essay...but it looks so much like some research essay. I mean, it's not really telling the reader much about me. I'm confused...How much focus should I put on each part of the question? :/</p>
<p>"**Discuss an issue of local concern. Why is this issue important to you? How do you think it should be addressed?"</p>
<p>Can i send my essay to someone for critical analysis and some help?? I'd really appreciate it</p>
<p>I don't really like U Mich's essay prompts. I would focus on how you would solve the problem... make it as personal as possible. Nonetheless, your opinions are supposed to tell them abut you and your writing abilities. Dont' sweat it tho, mich doesn't really care too much about the essay. pm if if you want</p>
<p>I'll take a look</p>
<p>I can read it if you still want</p>
<p>i can read it if you want...im an 08-er applying to umich, but i already sent in my app...but if you are wary, dont worry about it :)</p>