essay for USC

College Essays
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<p>I'm trying to make the Dec 1 scholarship deadline. any readers? I need help making this essay longer. What should I add? also, lemme know if the topic is cliche or if the essay comes off as boring.</p>

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<p>i'll readit</p>

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<p>anyone else want to read/critique?</p>

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<p>i need more readers!</p>

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<p>Sure thing, I'll be glad to take a look. PM me.</p>

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<p>I'll read it</p>

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<p>I'll check it out. ;D</p>

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<p>i will, <a href="mailto:octacarlos@gmail.com">octacarlos@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>would anyone else like to read?</p>

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<p>im just sitting here doing nothing. i guess i can.</p>

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<p>I can read it if you need any more readers. =]</p>

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<p>Ill read, and give feedbacks to you</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>