essay from down under :P

College Essays
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<p>hey guys!</p>

<p>im an Australian student and I'm not very familiar with the college essay paradigm, so if possible, PM me with your MSN/AIM or add me:
msn: mr<em>roast</em><a href="mailto:chicken@hotmail.com">chicken@hotmail.com</a><a href="don't%20ask%20,%20ive%20had%20it%20since%20year%205">/email</a>
aim: vesal.vay (i think)</p>

<p>i need my essay to be outstanding considering it's going to places like Princeton etc!
Cheers!!!</p>

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<p>would anyone like to read it?!??! lol</p>

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<p>Hey, did you read my feedback? I'm sorry I couldn't help more...Anyway, I recommend people read this guy's essay; it's pretty interesting and needs some polish.</p>

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<p>I can take a look.</p>