Essay Grading!

Test Preparation
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<p>Hey guys can you grade my essay, or tell me how to improve etc? Thanks</p>

<p><a href="http://i.imgur.com/bsyEdGS.jpg"&gt;http://i.imgur.com/bsyEdGS.jpg&lt;/a> First page
<a href="http://i.imgur.com/mj8sSFO.jpg"&gt;http://i.imgur.com/mj8sSFO.jpg&lt;/a> Second page</p>

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<p>Probably somewhere in the 8-9 range. Wouldn’t hurt to lengthen it a bit with one more example or some more analysis</p>