Essay Help Please!

Colleges and Universities A-Z Princeton University
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<p>I just finished my common app essay, and I'd like some people to critique it. Any help would be appreciated! (I'd rather get the negative feedback from you now than from Princeton in April)</p>

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<p>Ill read it PM me it</p>

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<p>sunny, if u need more help i'm available.</p>

<p>just pm it to me. if it's too long, pm it to me in 2 parts</p>

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<p>I guess you could pm it to me too.
I'll help =)</p>

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<p>I'll take a look:)</p>

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<p>pm me too, i'll read it</p>

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<p>sure, PM me it</p>

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<p>pm me (10char)</p>

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<p>if you still need help, pm me</p>

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<p>Hey Sunny, if you need more opinions I can take a look for you.</p>

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<p>I can take a look.</p>

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<p>I'll look at it carefully.</p>