essay help please!!

<p>hey, I'm applying to the UC's ( my goal is UCLA) and the essay questions are :
Prompt #1 (freshman applicants)</p>

<p>Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>

<p>and
Prompt #2 (all applicants)</p>

<p>Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>

<p>Some background info on me, im 18, Russian, parents divorced, go to a small jewish school,organized,artistic,pretty smart, parents immigrated here i was the first one born in the US. ANY suggestions or tips on how to make these essays amazing>????</p>