<p>Hey everyone,
this is my revised essay, i was wonder if anyone could help me out and tell em what they think. I'll pm you this essay if you can help. Thanks for the help, its much appreciated</p>
<p>Hey everyone,
this is my revised essay, i was wonder if anyone could help me out and tell em what they think. I'll pm you this essay if you can help. Thanks for the help, its much appreciated</p>