Essay Help Pleaseee?

[RB18]

<p>I wrote this essay pretty quick and I was wondering if someone can give me some feedback</p>

[Russkiy_Bear]

<p>PM it to me</p>

[nbalive2005]

<p>ill read, pm it</p>

[asdfjkl1]

<p>Sure! =] I'll give feedback!</p>

[ClaySoul]

<p>If you need some essay help send me an ol PM :)</p>