<p>Would anybody be kind enough to read my why Penn essay and give feedback? I really want to go here and want to make sure that it's conveyed in my essay. Constructive criticism is much appreciated
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<p>Sure. pm me your essay. btw, i applied CAS ED.</p>
<p>what school are you applying to? i can read it but i applied to SEAS ED</p>
<p>I can read it. Just PM your essay to me. I applied to wharton early.</p>