Essay Help!!!!

Colleges and Universities A-Z Rutgers University
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<p>Rutgers University is a vibrant community of people with a wide variety of backgrounds and experiences. How would you benefit from and contribute to such an environment? Consider variables such as your talents, travels, leadership activities, volunteer services, and cultural experiences. Only personal essays submitted via our website will be considered. You may enter a maximum of 4000 characters including spaces.</p>

<p>I need to write my rough draft of my college essay for english class. it's due tomorrow and I'm ****ed because my english teacher mentioned it last minute. Anway I am still kinda confused as to how I'm going to write this.</p>

<p>So far I have two points that i'd like to mention:</p>

<p>Being a twin- I knew from an early age that people are different (my twin brother). From being with my brother all the time I realized that it wasn't always about me.... </p>

<p>Travel- I've been to 42 states and I've witnessed diversity first hand. I'm also going to say something about how diversity is more interesting or something...</p>

<p>Any other ideas? How do you guys think I should write this? Four paragraphs? Five? should I add another point to make it 5 paragraphs? Using what I've told you, can you guys give me any more ideas on how I'm going to say that I'll contribute to Rutgers diversity? I'm obviouly not asking you to write my essay but can anyone give me a little guidance please? I'm kinda lost. THANKSSSSSSSSSSSSSS</p>

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<p>If I were you, I’d almost tell a story about how you visited various states and how you can share the experiences you had in those states (whether it be culture, food, architecture, etc.) with students at Rutgers to add to the schools diversity. Maybe include a bit about how you want to find people from the 8 states you haven’t visited and have them help you add to your personal understanding of diversity. </p>

<p>This really is a diverse school. I’ve met people here from just about every nationality in a relatively short amount of time.</p>