Essay Help!

Applying to College
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<p>Hey guys!</p>

<p>I've got two essays that need reviewing. I need to decide which one to use (if any-they are about hardships I've overcome in high school. I've heard that this isn't always such a good idea) for my common app and my Brown app. I would love some input and help, as long as it's not too harsh. PM me if you want to help out.
Thanks!</p>

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<p>or reply and I'll pm you.</p>

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<p>sure, just pm me :)</p>

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<p>if you want another opinion, send it over PM and i'll gladly read it and give feedback</p>