<p>Hi-
I've been working on my college essay for months and I'm trying really hard to make it as good as possible. This is my most recent "overhaul" of it. Looking for people to read it and critique.</p>
<p>Hi-
I've been working on my college essay for months and I'm trying really hard to make it as good as possible. This is my most recent "overhaul" of it. Looking for people to read it and critique.</p>