<p>I'm an International student and this is my first time to post. Could someone read my college essay and give me some advice? Thx a lot</p>
<p>Sure, pm me</p>
<p>Thx again 
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<p>I'm an International student and this is my first time to post. Could someone read my college essay and give me some advice? Thx a lot</p>
<p>Sure, pm me</p>
<p>Thx again </p>