Essay Help

So, I am planning on submitting a transfer application to Columbia University for Fall 2016 and I was wondering if there would be anyone willing to edit my personal statement. A lot of people have been saying not to post answers fully on here, so if I could message it and discuss it, that would be amazing. Thank you!

can you message me? i am also working on my ps these days

I am in need of editing as well! Haven’t finished yet though. Having trouble getting under the word limit. I don’t write very concisely ;(.

Has anyone else struggled with not being redundant in the supplement? There’s a supplemental question that asks us to explain how we realized what we wanted to study, the fields we identified in the other part of the application… But that was the whole personal part of my personal statement! I’m applying to transfer because I realized what I wanted to study, and my school doesn’t offer it.

So how are you all being “personal” in the personal statement?