<p>Frankly, My essays suck. I got an 8 in January. My examples are somewhat immature and I tried to do something about that bt it doesn't seem to work.
If you got better than me (which I'm pretty sure u did) then tell me your secrets.</p>
<p>This isn't really a secret, but if you can't think of "real" examples... make one up. The readers aren't looking for accuracy but only how well you can write.</p>