Essay help

I’m applying to the maximum limit of colleges that CommonApp allows, and I’ve just finished my personal statement. Can someone give me a hand and look over them?

I’d be glad to help! I just finished mines and my counselors said its perfect so I might have a good eye

General CC advice is someone with more experience. No offense intended, but another applicant doesn’t yet have results.

I’d be happy to help! Current Cornell student here.

I’ll offer a brief critique if you PM it to me. I am an adult poster.