Essay Help

<p>My mother is dead-set on having me write my essay on another topic, even though the one i've chosen is very close to my heart. She is convinced that the adcoms have read and will continue to read way too many essays about volunteering, etc. I was hoping that one of the parents on this forum would be willing to read my essay and tell me if they agree with her or give me whatever feedback possible. Thank you!</p>