essay help

Applying to College
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<p>hi would anyone mind reading my essay and offering some critique? i just finished it but now i'm afraid it's too ordinary. =/</p>

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<p>I'll read it over.</p>

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<p>So will I.</p>

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<p>you can PM me.</p>

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<p>Yes! Pm me.</p>

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<p>ill take a look. thanks</p>

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<p>i'll give it the once over</p>

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<p>I will read it</p>

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<p>I'll read it if you want me to.</p>

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<p>If you still need it I will, too.</p>

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<p>I'll be happy to read it, I am majoring in english; I might be able to help you the clarity of your essay. Bona fortuna :)</p>

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<p>I would like to read it too. pm me.</p>

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<p>PM me for sureeee</p>