<p>So I wrote it and re-wrote it and re-wrote it. Does anyone want to take a peek at my almost-final draft? Please tell me if anything sounds off or if there are any inconsistencies. It would be really awesome if you were not a senior who's applying to Cornell, NYU or UR, but the essay is very specific to me, so I don't think it should matter.</p>
<p>Oh, yea I will PM it to you and you can respond.. please?</p>
<p>i'll try to provide some constructive criticism :]] PM me</p>
<p>Sure, I'll take a go at it</p>