<p>I'm applying to the engineering school and I need some feedback on my essay. Anyone care to help?</p>
<p>I’m in Trinity but I would be glad to read your essay if you’re still looking for help.</p>
<p>I'm applying to the engineering school and I need some feedback on my essay. Anyone care to help?</p>
<p>I’m in Trinity but I would be glad to read your essay if you’re still looking for help.</p>