essay help~

<p>Okay, I'm a procrastinator. I admit it.</p>

<p>Anyway, I wrote out a response to the prompt about a significant experience a few days ago. The more I look at it, though, the more I have to wonder if I even answered the question correctly. It could be fine, of course, and perhaps I'm just being paranoid (how many essays have I re-written now...?) Would anyone mind looking over my essay to tell me whether I need to elaborate more? Thanksss!</p>

<p>If you are serious about going to Pomona and you have the numbers for it (700+ in all three areas), I would be happy to look at it for you if you post it here. My son is in his first year there, so I feel I have a idea of the flavor of the person they are looking for. An outstanding school!</p>