Essay help!

<p>Can someone please read my personal statements for NYU? Thanks. By the way I'm trying to transfer in as a sophmore.</p>

<p>I would love to! I’m a pretty decent writer.</p>

<p>Don’t worry, I won’t steal it. My college apps are done.</p>

<p>I’ll read if you’d like.<br>
And like rupee2, there’s no reason for me to steal. I was accepted ED last December.</p>

<p>i’m an international applicator from china
i have finished my college apps for 2010fall
however, i maybe gap a year to re-applicate for NYU because i think this year’s essay is pool.
i got IBT 94, but sat essay 11
if you’d like to, we can discuss
a girl from my school was accepted ED by NYU. maybe we can help you.</p>

<p>just pm me and i’ll give u feedback =]</p>